tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7765183185756260232.post1600695614982321735..comments2023-03-24T06:35:20.377-07:00Comments on Sugar Coated World: One-words: deathRoyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10597983153476226667noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7765183185756260232.post-72611768130499635012009-06-12T22:35:16.839-07:002009-06-12T22:35:16.839-07:00Thanks Doc Z and Jena!
comments coming from my mo...Thanks Doc Z and Jena!<br /><br />comments coming from my most revered peers are always a treasureRoyhttp://technology.roysville.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7765183185756260232.post-65595313906235149352009-06-12T22:21:37.671-07:002009-06-12T22:21:37.671-07:00Superb Roy,
In my line of work, you'll get A+...Superb Roy,<br /><br />In my line of work, you'll get A+ for this poem. I like short but complete lines. There are no words wasted. It goes straight for the jugular vein. Ouch! Bravo!Jena Islehttp://jenaisle-candidthoughts.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7765183185756260232.post-33975157374427856942009-06-12T18:55:46.650-07:002009-06-12T18:55:46.650-07:00Creative Roy!
Poetry is so flexible. you can do al...Creative Roy!<br />Poetry is so flexible. you can do almost anything with the words. hehehe. <br /><br />One word poem, bravo!<br /><br />Zzorlonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315933650875557697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7765183185756260232.post-49538179421729035732009-05-29T19:22:09.745-07:002009-05-29T19:22:09.745-07:00hi Luke,
it's an experiment. trying to see if it ...hi Luke,<br /><br />it's an experiment. trying to see if it could make sense, and also sound poetic at the same time.<br /><br />thanksRoyhttp://roysville.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7765183185756260232.post-84602769520006971252009-05-29T19:05:24.795-07:002009-05-29T19:05:24.795-07:00Powerful poem. Says a lot in so little and doesn't...Powerful poem. Says a lot in so little and doesn't waste words. This must be very difficult to do, condensing thoughts and ideas in as few words as possible. I mean, it's easier to ramble on than to make each word count. A grave topic gravely told.Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01905352757049565407noreply@blogger.com